Here are a few shots from my 1st photo run. I'm using a crappy digital camera so the quality isnt the best. But overall, I like.

 

So the subject in your photos is your MINI I see....and maybe too much of the MINI.

 

Not too bad, the wheels should be turned in the first pic imo, and the car is also cut out. Second pic is fine because the camera isn't that great but the fence in the background is distracting.

Not trying to bash the pics, just trying to give you a few pointers; and by no means am i a professional photographer either.

Keep trying, it's the only way to get better.